The majority of scenes from our thriller, will have little to no dialogue, as the beginning will be dark and daring and quite fast paced, creating a stalker feel. However there are two quite important scenes where we shall need dialogue;
- The kitchen scene with Mum and Anna
- The friend scene with Anna and her friend
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FIRST SCENE
The kitchen scene:
we set the scene in Dana's kitchen, which becomes the victim's house.
The Mum: Dana
Victim/Girl (Anna): Sophie
Scene; Its Morning, girl walks downstairs, puts on boots, picks up bag and wanders in into kitchen where her mum is drawing the curtains.
Mom: Morning,
Anna: Morning,
Mom: Why arnt you in uniform?
Anna: Its mufti day,
Mom: are you sure?
Anna: Yes mom,
Mom: Do you want some breakfast?
Anna: no thanks
Mom: I think you should have some breakfast (mom brings bowl and cereal over and sits down)
Anna: Don't we have any milk?
Mom: Yes its in the fridge,
Anna (gets up and goes to the fridge when her phones goes off)
Mom: (picks up phone, nosily and teasingly) who's texting you this early?
Anna: (grabs phone, agressively) get off!
Mom: (startled) whats wrong with you?!
Anna: (moodily/suliking almost) just don't touch my stuff!
Mom (grabs milk and puts back in fridge)
Anna: Whatever, I'm going to school! (Anna picks up bag, walks out and slams door)
The kitchen scene:
we set the scene in Dana's kitchen, which becomes the victim's house.
The Mum: Dana
Victim/Girl (Anna): Sophie
Scene; Its Morning, girl walks downstairs, puts on boots, picks up bag and wanders in into kitchen where her mum is drawing the curtains.
Mom: Morning,
Anna: Morning,
Mom: Why arnt you in uniform?
Anna: Its mufti day,
Mom: are you sure?
Anna: Yes mom,
Mom: Do you want some breakfast?
Anna: no thanks
Mom: I think you should have some breakfast (mom brings bowl and cereal over and sits down)
Anna: Don't we have any milk?
Mom: Yes its in the fridge,
Anna (gets up and goes to the fridge when her phones goes off)
Mom: (picks up phone, nosily and teasingly) who's texting you this early?
Anna: (grabs phone, agressively) get off!
Mom: (startled) whats wrong with you?!
Anna: (moodily/suliking almost) just don't touch my stuff!
Mom (grabs milk and puts back in fridge)
Anna: Whatever, I'm going to school! (Anna picks up bag, walks out and slams door)
SECOND SCENEThe friend scene, set outside in the back entrance to college.
Scene: Sophie passes through the gate to college and bumps into her friend who she hasn't spoken to in a long time and whose birthday she had forgotten...Friend: Amber
Victim/Girl (Anna): Sophie
the scene takes place inside college when friends bump into each other.
Friend: Anna (Taps arm)
Anna: Hello,
Friend: Where the hell have you been?
Anna: Iv just been really busy,
Friend: Are you still coming to my party Saturday?
Anna: Oh god I'm sorry i completely forgot i cant,
Friend: But you promised!
Anna: I'm sorry but iv got something else planned,
Friend: Oh you'v changed (Walks away)
Victim/Girl (Anna): Sophie
the scene takes place inside college when friends bump into each other.
Friend: Anna (Taps arm)
Anna: Hello,
Friend: Where the hell have you been?
Anna: Iv just been really busy,
Friend: Are you still coming to my party Saturday?
Anna: Oh god I'm sorry i completely forgot i cant,
Friend: But you promised!
Anna: I'm sorry but iv got something else planned,
Friend: Oh you'v changed (Walks away)
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